Picking up where I left off in the prior post on my approach for content editing (or is it revision…somebody give me a shout so I don’t continue to insult the real professionals that know what they are doing!).
3. Update my scene synopsis. I went through all of the scenes in Scrivener and updated the synopsis. If you haven’t figured out by now that I am a bit of a Scrivener fanboy! Sorry. As I was saying, the early chapters were dead on, the later… well, they needed more help. The goal was to be able to find a way to print them out, or transfer them to something, where I can fiddle around with their order. Syncing with Index Card on the iPad via AirDrop was a possibility, but I thought that may not give me the tools I need. Focusing on the synopsis though, I found some of them really needed work – they were either too vague to be useful or too long and detailed to be of any use regardless of what I chose to do.
4a. Re-build my timelines. I started the story with timelines I developed at the recommendation of Stackpole’s “21 Days to a Novel.” I am certain I took it farther than was ever suggested, but that is just the way I clack. My original timelines, as I mentioned earlier, were completely out of whack the closer I got to the end of the story. That, and I switched over to a Mac to use the official released version of Scrivener resulting in the obsolescence of the Visio diagrams on my PC. It was easy enough to rebuild in OpenOffice Draw and I now have a template for next time. I have three POV characters and each chapter I wrote had three scenes mimicking a short story format – I thought of each chapter as a short story. The time line became three boxes for the first character followed by three more boxes offset and below for the second, and finally three boxes offset and below for the third POV character. I added a few more boxes at the top for my “world” character and cut loose with copy/paste to generate all 26 chapters of three scenes in rotating character POV (whew!)
4b. Put all of the Synopsis in the timeline. Scrivener has a compile function for notecards (only took me an hour to find it…). It was a snap to generate an OpenOffice document containing only synopsis and associated chapter/scene headings. More copy/paste later and I had my updated timeline. Did I mention that I was a bit of a Scrivener fan boy?
So by now you probably have gotten the sense that I am a bit of an over analytical nerd…now what? (more to come)